Not Brothers

Contractual agreements with publisher caused DELETION JS Lambert

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/9/2011 8:21:00 PM

Maybe you CAN find a way to mend this relationship. Hope you'll give it a try, Joseph. My sister and I disagree on many things, but she's my sister and I'll always love her. This rhyme could easily be adapted to a sonnet. Per your question, I have no set style, but I enjoy writing humor most of all. Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/7/2011 6:50:00 PM

A touching piece..are you sure it cant be fixed? There is a certain bond though, that cant be broken. Very nice write. BG

Susie Lambert

Date: 3/7/2011 3:31:00 PM

Interesting

A Rambling Righting Riley - Shauna Riley

Date: 3/7/2011 12:20:00 PM

Reading this saddens me....my brother and I used to be really close...actually I hadn't known anyone else that was as close to a sibling as my brother and I were....but now we are not...I still hurt every day over this...not sure if it'd been better to have never been close so that I don't know what I'm missing...or to have been close and yearn for it again like I do now....I really the way you have conveyed this...well done!