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Not Broken

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Not Broken


Thrown onto the floor..
Maybe cracked but not broken..
Two hands picked it up..

Caressing with care..
Finally mending old scars..
Holding it close with warmth..

A heart now finds love..
Then she handed me her own..
Two hearts become one..

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  1. Date: 12/13/2012 12:20:00 PM
    Amazing Senryu. It has touched my heart. Thanks for visiting my Haiku The Flame and your beautiful comments, Michael. I admire your sensitivity. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 9:45:00 PM
    so romantic. I really loved this one, Michael. Merry Christmas to you and Roseana. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 10:13:00 AM
    Great senryu with its very inspiring and spirit uplifting message! I love it my dear friend! Kudos! Thank you so much for sharing! Advance merry merry Christmas to you and your family! I like your new avatar. love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 8:18:00 PM
    Aww :) two hearts become one I love that. This is beautiful!

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 5:10:00 AM
    This is a very touching and gentle but beautiful poem Michael. Love the delicate mending of the heart that then becomes stronger than it ever was :-) could be a fav for me. Shaz x

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:04:00 PM
    Awwww...so cute! great little write :) MERRY CHRISTMAS (SANTA) Michael...lol

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 9:39:00 PM
    Hi Michael, love is the best feeling that mends and melts like wax... your poem, and feelings are beautiful,.. the image encourages hope, when one feels all broken in the inside...thank you for the uplifting ending...always~ xox~pd

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 8:28:00 PM
    One word for this: PRECIOUS. I sure enjoyed the read!

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 8:07:00 PM
    This sounds like love. So let it be. Thanks for sharing with us. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 4:56:00 PM
    True love will found each other, nothing could break it down unless the love withdraw the existance it self. Love complete the imperfection, and your verses provoked it as well :)-hug, yanny

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:52:00 PM
    beautiful message. :) even though there was a fault... these two found each other at the right time. ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:00:00 PM
    Nice to read your write on this chilly afternoon. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 1:01:00 PM
    A pure gem you have brought to the paper,Michael.Straight from your very heart and soul my friend.Enjoy your Sunday afternoon across the see!

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 12:11:00 PM
    This is utterly one of the most beautiful writes I've ever read my friend! I really loved reading this illustrious and tremendous poem this afternoon! What a delightful and wondrous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 10:47:00 AM
    Romantic Michael, nice one xx

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 9:38:00 AM
    A lovely piece from the heart MJF! Enjoyed this gem of yours. Enjoy what is left of your weekend ;) love & hugs CTH

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 9:33:00 AM
    This is very beautiful and romantic. I'm glad two hearts became one...Hugs, Holly

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 9:14:00 AM
    Love happy endings:):) How beautiful!

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 8:47:00 AM
    you light up my night Michael..may all the fabulous day be yours ever...luv and light <3<3<3 SK

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 8:34:00 AM
    Michael, this is utterly so beautiful and romantic, I love it. Constance