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There is a place that I don't belong to, oh, how I wish I belong there. There is a place that is peaceful, oh, how I wish I have such peace. There is a place filled with nothing but joy, oh, how I wish I could be part of that joy. There is a place where it's far from this noisy city called earth, oh, how I wish I could be part of that calmness. There is a place that I am not there, oh, how I truly wish I am there. There is a place where it's so beautiful, with no words to describe such beauty. No one witnessed it before There is a place where, I dream of being, I dream of seeing, I dream of belonging, oh, how I wish I could love myself enough to worth being there. There is a place where everybody speaks of, a few dream of, but only some would get to be there. Oh, how I dearly wish we all could be there, not just me. who am I? not better than you

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Date: 2/24/2018 12:27:00 AM
hi Anna........i also wish for that place.........but will you please tell where is that place.....what i am predicitng you are talking about paradise...........which will give peace to our disturbed mind........ have a nice day and rest in peace..... thanks
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Date: 12/13/2017 11:36:00 PM
Very beautiful words. This place could be real if we all believed it to be.
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 12/17/2017 4:38:00 AM
Yes I agree :) thank you
Date: 12/4/2017 5:20:00 PM
I hope you find this special place and that you have lots of company to fully enjoy it.
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 12/5/2017 4:09:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 12/3/2017 4:29:00 PM
Very deep thoughts... if only evrryone thought the same... well written.
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 12/4/2017 12:06:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 12/3/2017 12:34:00 AM
Very heartfelt poem, we all wish to belong, and sometimes if feels like we never do, beautiful write!!
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Unfamiliar Flower
Date: 12/4/2017 12:06:00 PM
Yes exactly... thank you

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