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Not Awake, Alive

I'm not awake But I'm alive A life, a lie, It's all the same When you're asleep. I wake But I'm dead to the world, The real world, Where you're around, Somewhere, But your absence is A painful truth. I'm not awake, I'm living A life with you, Loving life with you. It will take time, But it will be Perfect when I wake with you One day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/8/2012 8:58:00 AM
This is truly what dreams are made of. I love your use of words. Sometimes they do come true, yes? love, Kathy
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Date: 6/7/2012 2:39:00 PM
Awww..i understand the feelings so well...brilliant...
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Date: 6/5/2012 5:53:00 PM
Beautifully written. Touching.
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Date: 6/4/2012 4:45:00 AM
Like it Annie, very well written. - Have a lovely day awake. - The love will come. - oxox Anne-Lise
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