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Not always golden

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Not always golden

silence without

    all the while

        crying within

Copyright © Sharon Ruebel

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  1. Date: 10/21/2013 8:41:00 PM
    Intense! You nailed the emotion, which seems to me to be difficult to find in senryu and haiku. You found it... Jack

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:31:00 AM
    Great insight! Silence can be as terrifying as it can be beautiful ; Attitude and prospective make all the difference . I hope you are smiling beyond the sadness of the moment. Sending happy thoughts your way; Michael.

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 11:13:00 PM
    a superb senryu!

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 1:50:00 PM true, Sharon ! - Wish you a great weekend, enjoy ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 11:47:00 AM
    hi, sharon.. been a while; so glad i came around to savor the bittersweet mood of your work... much dleighted!..:) huggs

    Ruebel Avatar Sharon Ruebel
    Date: 10/18/2013 12:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Nette, so good to see you once again. Hope you are well and doing fine. Thank you for your always kind words...Lov, Shar
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 1:00:00 PM
    alway a pleasure to read. especially from on of my original soupers.

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 6:35:00 AM
    I love poems that tell an entire tale in a few words. You are a master at it.

    Ruebel Avatar Sharon Ruebel
    Date: 10/17/2013 12:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello again hon. Just a little quickie, my time is so limited..Someday like you I wish I could just give most all of my time to writing. That is a precious dream. Your so precious and I Thank you for all your kind words. Lov, Shar
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 9:55:00 PM
    Very intriguing on the first read but then I could know the light humor in it, very nice, Shar

    Ruebel Avatar Sharon Ruebel
    Date: 10/17/2013 12:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Dr. Mehta, I am so pleased you liked this, and you got it! I truly love that you get it...Thank you for reading me and for always being so kind... As Always, Shar