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Not-So-Perky

Obliged, to senses’ pleasure and to soul’s discontent, I acknowledged all the appreciations, I often look at the world around me. They all appear same – puppets dancing on arrhythmic tunes. Clones moulded by the system, machines lethargically pretending to sweat for goals. Permanently busy nodding their way through, unsure of the purpose. An intense cold war for a better materialistic living. Fate of tames in the hands of hierarchy, with their laughter being echoed back to them. And then far away in mountains, amidst a fog of smoke, i inspect myself, indifferent and very much a part of this inanimate group, verily afraid of being accustomed to uptown lifestyle. Agitatedly, as this kindled fire turns into ashes, I have tried to learn, hoping the dots will connect someday. Little does my heart know and little does it seem to care!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/18/2015 1:07:00 AM
Pratik, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Pratik Khandelwal
Date: 12/18/2015 12:09:00 PM
Thank you Linda. Glad to see your message :)
Date: 12/17/2015 4:43:00 PM
Pratik, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Pratik Khandelwal
Date: 12/18/2015 12:10:00 PM
Hi Skat, Thank you for the warm welcome. Glad to be here. Cheers!

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