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Norwegian Tanka

Norwegian Tanka This day had sunlight Light shone through small windows My office was a stable The beast of burdens´ air reminds me That my work is not yet done.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/4/2012 5:50:00 PM

;-)...pd

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 12/5/2012 3:55:00 AM

thanks destroyer

Kathryn Collins

Date: 12/4/2012 7:55:00 AM

a simple smile here. love, Kathy

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 12/4/2012 11:14:00 AM

thank you Kathy

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/4/2012 6:05:00 AM

Thank you ... then I learned something new today ...... But tell me .... is there any difference? Your "Norwegian Tanka" is at least well written. Have a great first week in December. oxox / / Anne-Lise ... (Norway) :)

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 12/4/2012 7:10:00 AM

No Anne I didn~t get the tanka quite right so I cheated a little by calling it Norwegian tanka