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Northern Lights Rehearse

northern lights rehearse hibernating bear blinks, yawns... first cold blanket sown

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/22/2011 11:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Sidney's "Any New or old haiku Will do" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 11/21/2011 9:20:00 AM

Smile, yes we'll pull up some more covers as the cold progresses. Beautiful Carolyn, by the way I love Chocolate, especally Chocolate alligators and the beautiful star where God's precept first slept. Little did the world know from whence they had fallen. I enjoy my electric blanket these days as winter becomes a fact. Congrats on your worthy win. Agape, Moses

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/20/2011 5:11:00 AM

Congrats for excellent win, Thanks,bl

David Williams

Date: 11/19/2011 11:40:00 AM

Carolyn congrats on your winter win bbrrr..David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2011 8:17:00 AM

you painted a nice arctic circle picture. It could have been for the On Top of the World contest too. Was it? Congrats on the win, Carolyn. oh, and thanks for the card. You are an EARLY bird!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/19/2011 6:55:00 AM

Congratulations on the win with this wonderful poem, Carolyn

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/10/2011 2:10:00 AM

Question is: NORTHERN LIGHTS or SOUTHERN COMFORT? I love this Haiku expression of bears blankets blinks and bliss! ...ALSO, I hope you know how very much your help means to me. You have been Fair, encouraging, and truthful with me on SOOO many issues. This Holds Weight In Gold, Unlike that fake Green Monopoly Money we hold in high regard!?! Thanks for the Info on the Jesus Reflection. I am over joyed that you gave you liked my NERD Words and "NAM BOYS Poems! YOU are the measure I go by!7rateHere

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 11/4/2011 1:23:00 PM

Carolyn yours is so good! LOL about hibernate-I didn't even look it up-I just assumed it was a 'season' word so threw it in there! Yours is so vivid-great description. It was nice to hear your late husband won on Jeopardy! You are into the smart men, huh? I was always into the dumb jocks-LOL! Love, Natalie

Daver Austin

Date: 11/2/2011 2:13:00 PM

That's putting the spotlight directly on that bear. This is a real good one. Luck in the contest. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2011 10:38:00 PM

I like all the imagery in this , Carolyn.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/30/2011 2:41:00 PM

btw...i wrote a lil ditty for your contest..does lines 1-2 & 5 have to have exactly the same syllable count? In my limerick, first line has 10 syllables, second line has 10 syllables, 5th line has 9 syllables...how have I come so far to be so far away? ...The 5th line has to have 10 syllables too? ( I am crying.......awwww. Tell me I am wrong). :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/30/2011 2:37:00 PM

Hey Carolyn....we were BOTH looking towards the sky...great minds do think alike...I don't write about bears tho....scared to death of them...love the rehearsal of your nighttime light show as the bear tucks in for the winter.....i am still trying to find out my seasonal word....looking at a list of seasonal words seems like cheating to me but I know absolutely nothing of this thing Charles calls haiku....lol. Love, Gwendolen

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/30/2011 12:17:00 PM

Well put Carolyn, i hope that blanket's not soon sewn 'however..well wished for win..

Jack Horne

Date: 10/30/2011 11:52:00 AM

Beautiful haiku, my friend - yes, the rules were certainly strict, LOL. I didn't look up a season word - perhaps I should...

Katherine Stella

Date: 10/30/2011 10:47:00 AM

hey g/f changed the all in the family and one for charles hope that will do it thanks for heads up he is one tough cookie and now to yours simply number 1 in my book loved the imagery and play with words here makes this bear berry happy keep up the great writing and thanks for your kind reviews keep on trucking dear lady blessings and have a safe halloween tomorrow

Kash Poet

Date: 10/30/2011 5:42:00 AM

Beautiful haiku Carolyn.Enjoyed.Best wishes for the contest.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/29/2011 9:09:00 PM

All these beautiful Haiku that's been written, I love it! Yes Carolyn, I do love the Haiku form and I have noticed great skills of the Haiku in you! The talent shows in this write!! Awesome work!!

John Smith

Date: 10/29/2011 7:34:00 PM

Winter's on the way. I picture snow your blanket, unless you sew them yourself?

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 10/29/2011 7:31:00 PM

* “I Thought The Intrigue & Fascination Surrounding The Northern Lights * My Dear Sweet Precious Carolyn * Big Furry Bears Like Lovely Teddy Bears * Yawning In The Cold While Thinking of Something Sweet * Wonderful * Luv * Sarah.” *

Nancy Jones

Date: 10/29/2011 6:40:00 PM

You're WAY ahead of me! But I did check out my yarn supply yesterday...is prob a geography thing, yeah? ~N