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North Star

Of which the moral he never found That allegory was she Sing to a fine tune, he could never That ballad was she Taking pride In a deaf audience that sitar, that shehnai was she Writ in a language He knew not That manuscript was she She was the North Star, He a blind, lost traveler

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/7/2015 5:33:00 PM
Hi Fasy, a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! You are off to a great start with this wonderful piece! Well done and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 9/7/2015 2:34:00 AM
Hi Fasy, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/6/2015 12:58:00 PM
Fasy, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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