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None Touched

clouds and cliffs below a million flowers and none touched one petal falls amongst the wilted gone soon will crisp sad flowers waiting for spring to lift them and none touched 4-29-13

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David Scott

Date: 6/10/2013 12:07:00 PM

REMINDS ME OF MY SEASONS WRITE XX DAVIDSCOTT

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/18/2013 5:27:00 PM

Hey the flowers are the sexual parts of the plant. If they have not done their job, that is indeed sad.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/6/2013 2:06:00 PM

Beautiful, my dear. So nice that sometimes we can just leave nature untouched and enjoy the beauty! :) Hugs!

Opondi Ougo

Date: 5/2/2013 2:31:00 AM

I smell spring...:-) Deep piece you've penned here Laura.thanks a lot and nice times :-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/1/2013 9:35:00 AM

a beautiful one Laura,...always~ Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/30/2013 3:23:00 AM

- Laura, this was lovely - Untouched and new, gives spring a second chance. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)