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None Touched

clouds and cliffs
below a million flowers
and none touched

one petal 
falls amongst the wilted gone
soon will crisp

sad flowers
waiting for spring to lift them
and none touched


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  1. Date: 6/10/2013 12:07:00 PM

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 5:27:00 PM
    Hey the flowers are the sexual parts of the plant. If they have not done their job, that is indeed sad.

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 2:06:00 PM
    Beautiful, my dear. So nice that sometimes we can just leave nature untouched and enjoy the beauty! :) Hugs!

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 2:31:00 AM
    I smell spring...:-) Deep piece you've penned here Laura.thanks a lot and nice times :-)

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 9:35:00 AM
    a beautiful one Laura,...always~ Linda

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 3:23:00 AM
    - Laura, this was lovely - Untouched and new, gives spring a second chance. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)