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I have a poem in my mind, A poem that I tried. I laugh along and I cried, As the sense of this poem I crave to find. I have looked on the title but there is none, Even in my pocket it is gone. Where would I see you under the sun? Or is it true that you already left and would never come. The meaning of this poem still is a mystery, Though I am up for verse three. This poem doesn't make sense I guess, And it is just like me.

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Date: 3/21/2016 8:58:00 PM
once again, I am pleased to read your poems today, and once again Oliver. LINDA
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Date: 10/22/2015 3:38:00 AM
- Hello Oliver :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/18/2015 4:34:00 PM
Hi Oliver, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/17/2015 5:13:00 PM
Oliver, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/17/2015 4:13:00 AM
Hi Oliver. This poem made me smile with its unpretentious directness. It makes sense, in a way that most people can somehow identify with the sentiment at one point in their lives. Nice poem! Looking forward to reading from you in the coming days. Let me welcome you to Poetry Soup! This is a community of friendly poets who would encourage you in your poetic journey. Keep writing, keep posting, and start visiting other poets. There are other Filipinos here too... Mabuhay, kabayan!
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