Non-Toxic Love

Non-Toxic Love Pecking order glances Destroys friendship chances Dissolves love, annuls romances. Surviving smart as a fox… Smooths that road of hard knocks… So step out of the box. Live above mental kicks. Care, without verbal pricks, Strengthen homes made of sticks. Avoid hot gossiping lips Prevent ill judger's grips. Watch the evil one do flips. Find peace with the white dove. Be sheltered by God above. Receive His gift… non-toxic love. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 22, 2010 Poetic form: Rhyme

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Dr Igor Von Graves

Date: 1/23/2010 12:53:00 PM

I enjoy toxic things very much toxic love illuminates the night. this is a very good write all joking aside your skill is beautifully shown here. please check out my newwest creation from the lab

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/22/2010 6:21:00 PM

This one is really good.I like it.

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/22/2010 8:23:00 AM

Yes this is the one. my pick of the day. it goes along with the one i wrote today"things". this goes to my favs and i make a copy of it for my personal files. great work. John Henry Loving III

James Peranteau

Date: 1/22/2010 6:59:00 AM

Wonderful testament Dane to that evil one wanting us to twist our thoughts !!! Awesome write Dane !!!!! james

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/22/2010 4:21:00 AM

"Strengthen homes made of sticks" catches my attention, the right kind of love really will build a stronger home - must have been nice to write something longet after all those two liners !