Non-Sense

Glass doors, wooden windows, soft steel, metal pillows. Broken emotion, solid heart, invisible ocean, light in the dark. Desert rivers, frozen time, empty spaces, completely fine. Life of dreams, sleeping awake, clean messes, dirty lakes. Friendly fires, sharp realities, crying liars, argue agrees. Weird normalcies, bragging modesty. This makes a great-deal of NON-Sense to me.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/8/2018 8:14:00 AM

Wow, has it been over 4 years since you posted this one? I enjoyed reading it again.

Earl Schumacker

Date: 5/10/2014 12:42:00 PM

Hi Felisha, Non-sense is great. It has an interestingly dark clean feel to it. I read a few of your other poems. You have a nice sharp edge to your works. (That's a good thing.) It's obvious you put some thought, heart and soul into them. Keep up the great work. Regards and best of luck to you, Earl

Karen Anglesey

Date: 5/6/2014 8:49:00 PM

Awesome portrayal of the plight we face. Great rhythm and rhyme. :)

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/6/2014 2:47:00 PM

Hi Felisha, This poem was right on... Right to the point and well crafted . Nice write:~) Thanks for sharing this write with us here and Congrats for having this featured. Peace, Deborah

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/2/2014 5:51:00 PM

The world is indeed made up of a whole lot of nonsense but it is the only one we have. I enjoyed your first poem, I hope you enjoy your experience here.

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/17/2014 5:29:00 PM

and with the last line i would definatly agree.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/12/2014 4:14:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Felisha :) - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 4/11/2014 10:09:00 PM

Felisha , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/11/2014 7:47:00 PM

Hi Felisha, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@