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Nocturnal Splendor

Twilight surrenders the sky when night takes hold, offering the throne to the moon and stars of gold. Luna appears in a sparkling silver gown that glows. She smiles on the world, graceful in a peaceful pose. How beautiful is the night to a stargazer like me, where threads of light resemble fine lace in filagree. Celestial ornaments sparkle across night's expanse. Captured in their spell, couples dream of romance. There's the scent of flora wafting in a gentle breeze and the sweet aroma of magnolia decorates the trees. Calmness prevails and earth seems to be less stressed at night when the moon shines over the mountain crest. I linger in the tranquility of tonight's heavenly embrace, enjoying the black velvet darkness of boundless space. I feel the need to thank God for such a wondrous gift, for it soothes my soul and gives hope a spiritual lift. When the night is silent, my memories have no bounds. If filled with bird trills, I hear nature's sweet sounds. The song of a nightingale is part of her vocal symphony. How beautiful is the night to me, audibly and visually. Incredulous sights and sounds fill me with pleasure when night falls and I feel His glory beyond measure. Often, I'm in awe while gazing at nocturnal splendors, grateful that I treasure what God so lovingly renders. November 16, 2022 ~ Beauty of Night Contest Sponsored by Sotto Poet

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Date: 11/18/2022 1:29:00 PM
- Yes, it's a wonderful gift, Jenna... beautifully written :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/13/2022 9:19:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise.
Date: 11/17/2022 8:02:00 PM
"I linger in the tranquility of tonight's heavenly embrace" - The entire poem is very beautiful. Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/13/2022 9:19:00 AM
Thanks, Chris.
Date: 11/17/2022 5:07:00 PM
This winning piece has excellent lines, Jenna. Congratulations on winning first place in my contest.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/13/2022 9:19:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Lasaad.
Date: 11/16/2022 4:45:00 PM
Jenna, such a gorgeous poem, beautifully enchanting, I am sure it will place high on the winner's list!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/13/2022 9:19:00 AM
Thanks, Tania.
Date: 11/16/2022 10:09:00 AM
I am delighted by the quality of your quatrains, Jenna. As usual, you have written to the stars and beyond. I see this as placing first in Lasaad's contest, because I can't imagine anyone writing a better ode to the heavens. A FAVE. This should be a P.O.T.D.!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/16/2022 8:23:00 PM
I know exactly how you feel, Jenna. Sometimes I feel positive I have a winner, then it doesn't even place. Oh well, we know our worth! (chuckling)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/16/2022 10:51:00 AM
I dare not assume anything I enter into any contest will be acknowledged so highly, but thank you for your ongoing support, milt. I really appreciate the faith you have always shown in my poetry.
Date: 11/16/2022 9:35:00 AM
Staring into the expanse of our universe, safe and sound from here on earth, couples become one with nature, what’s it all about, does it even matter, for it feels good, I think Lasaad will love this stunning piece, I do, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/16/2022 10:49:00 AM
It's quite a humbling experience for a lowly human to realize that we are just specks of dust upon the earth. Thanks so much for such insightful words, David. I'm so glad you think this one worthy of a placement.
Date: 11/16/2022 7:15:00 AM
Nothing more beautiful than a clear night sky and to see the wonders of gods creation in all its glory. Beautiful writing Jenna. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/16/2022 10:47:00 AM
Aye, Tom. There's truth in beauty, and not many things more wondrously beautiful than the heavens at night. Thanks for your encouraging comments.
Date: 11/16/2022 6:40:00 AM
Simply beautiful poetry, Jenna, I really enjoyed reading this. A clear stary night is truly a gift of God. John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/16/2022 6:50:00 AM
Hi John. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my lines. You are absolutely right about the night being a divine gift from God. Thank you ever so kindly for your comments.
Date: 11/16/2022 6:31:00 AM
Jenna, just beautiful! Wonderful descriptions of the feeling of space, and its expanse and the kiss of God as well. I have often gazed at the night sky feeling the same things you so lovingly and beautifully describe . I love the quiet calmness of your words enveloping me. big hugs and all good wishes, Susan. :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/16/2022 6:49:00 AM
Hi Susan, and I sincerely thank you for such wonderful remarks on my stargazing. It truly is wonderful to notice how glorious the nights can be. You thoroughly comprehend each line I've written.

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