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Nocturnal Reverie

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The sultry night dispelled the light warm breeze, As he snoozed on the hot sand of the beach: She smiled and giggled, a dance of a tease, Till she flew up quite far beyond his reach. He moaned; desire urged him to fly with her. Could he zoom towards scintillating stars? Achieve a love along the milky way, Add her in his voluminous memoirs? Search for passion in dark night's misty ray? Summer silence held him in tangled blur.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/13/2021 10:14:00 AM

I enjoyed this write and fun picture. Have a great/blessed day writing away.....................

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 12/5/2021 10:50:00 AM

What a reverie it was, it’s a pity you didn’t get to zoom to the stars. Lovely and romantic Victor… Belle

Judy Ball

Date: 12/1/2021 1:33:00 PM

Beautifully romantic piece here Victor. Loved it. God Bless, JB

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 12/1/2021 2:33:00 AM

Romantic and lovely...Delice

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/30/2021 10:40:00 PM

I find this to be such a lovely and beautiful poem! Enjoyed the read! I hope you are doing well Victor.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 11/30/2021 9:31:00 PM

Victor, this reads as being of a high inspiration. I found quite elegant with a music and sensuous flow. A Fav! Hugs, Sally

Eve Roper

Date: 11/30/2021 9:36:00 AM

Lovely verse, dear friend ! lots of Love and Hugs

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 11/30/2021 3:00:00 AM

Beautiful dreamy reverie! Enjoyed

David Smith

Date: 11/29/2021 12:42:00 PM

Wow. Did not see that one coming. You just can't stop showing off. Age has not slowed down your sense of fun. You old romantic you. Hope you eventually make it up there amongst the stars. If you go before me I will be watching the night sky for you. Very best regards David in NZ

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/29/2021 11:16:00 AM

Dreamlike fantasy - a lovely write, Victor!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/29/2021 10:01:00 AM

Fantastic and lovely images of a dream romance. I love his pondering on flying off to the stars. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/29/2021 6:23:00 AM

Victor, you have created a stunning poem. In the summertime calm of twisted rods, your wonderful metaphors create a crystal-clear image!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2021 6:20:00 AM

Very emotive and passionate work you have penned in this one. Dreams whether they be daydreams or night dreams make a mark on our lives. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara

Supraja Kannan

Date: 11/29/2021 6:15:00 AM

Beautiful and unique imagery....

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/29/2021 5:02:00 AM

Much revelry in this reverie, Victor--though short lived. But that is how dreams are. Creative thoughts!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/29/2021 4:58:00 AM

A joy to read Victor, hugs jan xx

Jenna Logan

Date: 11/29/2021 3:28:00 AM

I know you don't reply to comments, but I wanted you to know how much I enjoyed reading this one. Even in a dream, he was afraid to join her. More is the pity.

Valsa George

Date: 11/29/2021 2:39:00 AM

So he levitated up into the air travelling on the wings of a beautiful reverie, chasing his love ! Even a reverie is half good as a real experience... ! Lovely presentation Victor

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/29/2021 1:52:00 AM

Very unique and interesting, Victor:)

Silpika Kalita

Date: 11/29/2021 1:49:00 AM

Deep and profound, wrapped in the connotation of summer silence of tangled bars, with the splendid metaphors creating the vision crystal clear! Awesome Victor, love the interplay of words and imageries... Silpika