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Nocturnal Noises

A sun drenched day decided it needs some sleep, again A nigh time shadow leads to nocturnal noises, again Then it came; first a bat frequency noted its presence Then it’s sharp noise; first the crunch, then the crackle We looked up high, the moon beam caught our eye We turned to leave, the beady prey took swoop Too small, it’s shadow cast upon our faces; we turned It’s breath caught her hair; no scream just a jump The nocturnal hunt in full flow, we stood firm Then the beats, then the chorus, then the cracks A crescendo of noise; more creatures, more shadows Why run? Why care? Why dare? Why here? Don’t fear the nocturnal nature hunt A carnivore, a herbivore; an omnivore; All present, all here, big and small We are mere spectators; they don’t care Natures sway, their way, never to decay We stood firm We closed our eyes We listened We danced We felt at one Oh nocturnal noises; natures natural music By Shane Cogan (September, 2013)

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Date: 9/16/2013 9:10:00 PM
I REALLY ENJOYED YOUR PIECE PENNED BEAUTIFUL
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Shane Cogan
Date: 9/18/2013 7:36:00 AM
Thanks, Liam for reading it and your positive feedback.
Date: 9/7/2013 4:13:00 PM
Shane, i like this one very much too... I don't know why, but I enjoyed the flow, and the rhymes PER line... made the poem interesting.... Why run? Why care? Why dare? Why here? ----A carnivore, a herbivore; an omnivore;...ha Pure awesome... xox~ Linda
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Shane Cogan
Date: 9/18/2013 7:38:00 AM
Ha. Thanks, Linda. Its all about the nature, as they day. I like to flow the words and rhyme them, as I think it gives the poem that extra sequence. Thanks for reading and the positive feedback. Shane
Date: 9/6/2013 11:47:00 PM
Cool idea, the woods' noises at night as natural music!!!
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Shane Cogan
Date: 9/18/2013 7:39:00 AM
Absolutely, Andrea. Everyone should take time out and listen the magic of nature at nighttime.

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