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Blind to the dark circles full moon watches in orbit Aimless rotation choice or direction revolves around pattern Leathery wings visionless radar faceless intuition Howls in a distant barbarian expanse alert olive eyes Kindly conjunction shared perception silent awareness *** Triversen, June 10, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Date: 6/13/2017 1:07:00 AM
I've read this 5 times now and I'm not finished reading it! Wolf likes very much! Haha! Crane Bag ~~~/|\~~~
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Darren White
Date: 6/13/2017 1:19:00 AM
I knew you'd like it :)
Date: 6/11/2017 9:13:00 PM
I love this Darren.
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Darren White
Date: 6/12/2017 1:13:00 AM
Thanks mo, glad you like it.
Date: 6/11/2017 7:57:00 AM
I love your poem Darren, the whole theme set to the amazing music, lends itself to be read and read again....Impressive !!...Maria
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Darren White
Date: 6/11/2017 8:34:00 AM
Love it that you love it. Thank you my friend :)
Date: 6/10/2017 7:23:00 PM
Very nice, I love the second stanza :) *Tom Alan Quest*
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Darren White
Date: 6/10/2017 7:41:00 PM
Thank you, I am glad you like it!
Date: 6/10/2017 1:08:00 PM
Wow , this is so nice Darren. I was pulled right into the poem as I was reading it :)
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Darren White
Date: 6/10/2017 1:42:00 PM
Thanks Heidi :)
Date: 6/10/2017 12:54:00 PM
A beautiful poem my friend
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Darren White
Date: 6/10/2017 1:43:00 PM
Thanks Tim :)

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