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Nobody Knows

Nobody knows how I feel inside Nobody knows how many tears I’ve cried Nobody knows how many fears I’d had Nobody knows how I wish I’d die Too many times I’ve struggled up Too many times I’ve given out love Too many times I’ve hurt too deep Too many times I’ve looked for peace I’m feeling now the end in near I’m feeling now to finish it here I’m feeling now I no longer care I’m feeling now to move on there.

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Cecil Hickman

Date: 8/12/2008 4:40:00 PM

your words show the frustrations and sadness within the flowing lines that are so very descriptive which shows the pain and anguish you have felt,,blessings..Cecil

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 7/24/2008 8:48:00 AM

Hard write, Robin. Never, never, never quit. Every being on earth brings something special to the table. God Bless. Good emotional write. Vince

Michael Jordan

Date: 7/23/2008 7:48:00 PM

Hi Robyn - I bet it's a blessing to have those days behind and blue skies ahead - I love the emotion you pour out in your writing - You are a gift and a dear friend - stay Blessed

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/23/2008 3:28:00 PM

This poem evokes a desperate state of mind...one that we all share at certain times in our lives. The darkest day can pass, if we let time heal our hearts. It feels like it takes too long, but it is definitely worth giving time the chance. Tomorrow may be a joy you didn't expect. You are not alone. Love, Carrie

James Foulk

Date: 7/23/2008 11:48:00 AM

you should read my poem "Always Someone Worse" life is not always fair. it is not supposed to be. if life was good all the time, when things did get good you would not know it. tomorrow my big better, no one knows. at any case this was a great poem. and we need to write what is inside to release our feelings that you have done. well penned piece of poetry. and thank you for reading my pome and for your comment. things will get better.

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/23/2008 5:49:00 AM

I know it's a saying, but it has been true in my life, that things always seem darkest before the dawn. Hang on, have faith, for there is no doubt a change for the better will be coming your way. A very emotional write, many of us can relate to. Love, Shar

Leah Yoho

Date: 7/22/2008 6:33:00 PM

Exelent Robyn, full of raw emotion. But you can't seriously think that ending your life is a good choice! This reminds me of a poem that I've writen for a friend of mine you should read it. Love Always, Leah.

Christy Hardy

Date: 7/22/2008 3:50:00 PM

Don't give up, grab on, and find something that makes you happy, mine is writing songs,poems, and painting. Some days, I paint all day...My blessings to you, Always, Christy