Get Your Premium Membership

Nobodies Home

The walls resonate like the inside of a brass bell. Footfalls act as the clapper bouncing sound like a ping pong ball from wall to wall. The antique oriental rug with its dragon vase had long left, the black enameled troche no longer lit the floor in puddles of orange light. Hollowed out, the place was…. scooped like a cantaloupe free of the seeds of man, of childish laughter and parental spats. Dust bunnies scurry in the late afternoon through the sunlight from dirty window panes. Spiders weave webs in the corners of long forgotten dreams… Soon, all too soon, this will be the case, the leaving will come footfalls will lead to the last closing, the brass doorknob will no longer reflect my face and the emptiness will fill with the dreams of a new family...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/29/2013 6:06:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win. AO
Login to Reply
Date: 5/29/2013 1:21:00 PM
you have a home-- this world and more...congrats on your fine win!..:) hugggs
Login to Reply
Date: 5/29/2013 11:52:00 AM
I'm sure your spirit and smile will linger to ensure happiness...congratulations Debbie
Login to Reply
Date: 5/28/2013 8:00:00 PM
Well done. I didn't even miss the rhyme. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 5/28/2013 2:03:00 PM
great write....congrats on your win
Login to Reply
Date: 5/28/2013 1:26:00 PM
- Thanks for letting me visit your home - Congratulations on your win in the contest: "A Home" - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/28/2013 1:17:00 PM
My big hearty congratulations my dear friend , Deb for your win and your very beautiful poem. I love it so much and I’ve extremely enjoyed. Thanks a lot for your full support! Love lots, Leonora
Login to Reply
Date: 12/29/2010 4:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Matt Caliri's "Empty Apartment" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2010 12:42:00 PM
Home is where the heart is and mine is still here, yet, trying to get my head around the idea it won't be for much longer.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/18/2010 8:47:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your super win in the Empty Apt. contest with yet another great entry TEACH.. enjoy sweet victory with luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 12/18/2010 10:12:00 AM
Hi Deborah. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Eamon
Login to Reply
Date: 12/17/2010 11:19:00 PM
The clapper bouncing like a ping pong ball from wall to wall. /the place was…. scooped like a cantaloupe free of the seeds of man, of childish laughter and parental spats. How original and impressive!!! Congrats, my Lady ...
Login to Reply
Date: 12/17/2010 11:45:00 AM
Very nice imagery in this poem and the emotions tug at our heartstrings. Congrats on your win!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/17/2010 11:31:00 AM
deborah, what an amazing piece... bouquets for you in bagging this award!! huggs, nette
Login to Reply
Date: 12/6/2010 6:21:00 PM
what are you mourning here Deborah, so full of regret and mourning...
Login to Reply
Date: 12/6/2010 11:37:00 AM
Beautiful write dear poet ! much love, james
Login to Reply
Date: 12/6/2010 9:56:00 AM
I was quite taken with this poem and the atmosphere you created in such brevity. It is sad, yes, but also so very, very haunting. This is a wonderful piece of poetry. Thank you.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/5/2010 3:56:00 PM
Welcome back. How was the trip to Egypt. You have rbought quite a good pieces like this one, Deb
Login to Reply
Date: 12/5/2010 3:11:00 PM
This piece has everything in it Deb.. metaphors and comparisons galore and a taste of irony looking back to the way things used to be.. intense dramatic words and lines luv..
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs