Noah's Grace

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Image of Noah's Ark on Mount Ararat in Turkey

Noah’s Grace Noah found grace in the sight of the Lord. Once built an ark and put many aboard. All the while as he prepared for the ark, Having room for the large beasts to embark, Sins of mankind were causing God great pain. God washed away with his torrents of rain. Raging tides and a deluge started first. All the world was just a sea with no earth. Calming storm after forty days and nights. Easy breeze takes them to Ararat heights. 8/28/16 ACROSTICALLY I STAND TALL Poetry Contest Sponsored by: James Edward Lee Sr.

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 9/12/2016 11:04:00 AM

This is nice. Congratulations. Kai

Janis Thompson
Date: 9/12/2016 6:52:00 PM

Thanks, Kai.

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 9/10/2016 11:38:00 PM

A nice precise part of the story in acrostic. Congrats Sunita

Janis Thompson
Date: 9/11/2016 3:50:00 PM

Thanks, Sunita

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/10/2016 6:14:00 PM

Enjoyable acrostic, Janis! How calming the last line and informative! Congrats!

Janis Thompson
Date: 9/10/2016 9:32:00 PM

Thanks, Kim.

Lu Loo

Date: 9/10/2016 5:01:00 PM

Janis, congrats on your placement lovely lady :)-luloo

Janis Thompson
Date: 9/10/2016 9:33:00 PM

Thanks, luloo....

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/10/2016 12:38:00 PM

Such a lovely, rhyming Acrostic, Janis, that presents so much imagery as you express this amazing Biblical event. Congratulations on your fine placement on such a short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra

Janis Thompson
Date: 9/10/2016 1:16:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra. It didn't know it would be such a close contest. Not many winners.