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Silk flaxen braids The sapphire pools of enchantment The bottomless look of mystery And she twirls Her hair lax in airstreams A glimpse beyond that caving fringe A curl at her cherry’s end My eyebrows taken aback O am I blessed to be seen! By the beauty in the breeze Now does she stride, To where I stall!? But- She strolls past Like the blind in a mist Of whom she is Corrected by Corrine, x

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Date: 6/8/2009 11:21:00 AM
Nice Visuals. Peace. Boo
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Date: 6/2/2009 9:12:00 AM
VERY nice - So descriptive and sexy! She strolls "past"
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