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jeans and a tee shirt vivid imagination undressed by his eyes

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Karen Jones

Date: 3/26/2024 6:24:00 AM

A great senryu! Love this.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/27/2024 5:31:00 AM

Thanks Karen.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/2/2023 2:31:00 PM

most witty, Richard....just wanted to say 'hi'...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/2/2023 3:21:00 PM

Hi Sara. ;0)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/8/2023 12:33:00 PM

When I saw the title, just had to check it out, and it did not disappoint, very witty :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/18/2023 9:50:00 AM

Thanks Michelle.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/5/2023 11:04:00 PM

OH! This is a cheeky write. ;) The imagination runs wild indeed!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/7/2023 7:09:00 AM

;0) Thanks.

Bill Baker

Date: 9/5/2023 6:42:00 AM

Thought-provoking Senryu, Richard. Sometimes the imagination leads to realization; therein lies the mystery, Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry. Have a great day! Bill

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2023 4:04:00 PM

Thanks Bill.

John Lawless

Date: 9/4/2023 6:00:00 AM

The world has become an endless game of "show don't tell"

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/4/2023 6:12:00 AM

A good play on words.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/3/2023 8:14:00 AM

i like ;) (i'd call it a sexy senryu though)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/3/2023 11:02:00 AM

You are indeed correct. Thanks for your visit.

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/3/2023 8:03:00 AM

Richard you painted a breathtaking picture of jeans and a tee shirt, as if they were being undressed by his eyes, revealing a world of vivid imagination.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/3/2023 11:03:00 AM

Thanks buddy.