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Tiens mes pensées close let your dreams lie impassioned albeit pensive succumb to the sultry beats echoing across empty hearts and within the day breeze tomber en moi Faraway but close enough to see you no longer holding me I know yes I see

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Date: 1/27/2017 1:59:00 PM
I still come back to this poem so often Tim, because it's so INCREDIBLY good!
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Date: 12/1/2016 6:07:00 PM
I knew there was a reason for my picking a Tim Smith poem to read tonight. So moving.
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/1/2016 6:21:00 PM
Thanks so much
Date: 11/30/2016 6:36:00 PM
My God Tim, your poems reach in.
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Jean Murray
Date: 12/2/2016 12:00:00 PM
So...YOU were the creep?? I knew it!
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/1/2016 6:11:00 PM
Thanks Jean...since I got banned from POF I have more time to write j/k...lol
Date: 11/30/2016 3:08:00 PM
Heartbreaking, Tim. Expressed so well...that ending says it all. The song is beautiful. Thanks for sharing....
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/30/2016 3:11:00 PM
Thanks Eileen. It is such a moving song
Date: 11/30/2016 1:23:00 PM
beautiful but so sad Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/30/2016 2:04:00 PM
It is a sad one...thanks Jan
Date: 11/30/2016 6:16:00 AM
Sadly beautiful my friend. I hope this is only your imagination writing...
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/30/2016 10:24:00 AM
Mostly imagination...it is such a powerful song
Date: 11/30/2016 4:44:00 AM
- I fell deeply into this song ... a wonderful singing voice :) - Thanks Tim, for both poetry and song ... deeply moving - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/30/2016 10:23:00 AM
Yes so did I...I love his voice
Date: 11/30/2016 2:27:00 AM
This is very sad Tim...Sad indeed..but beautifully written.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/30/2016 10:22:00 AM
Thanks Charma...that song always makes me tear up...I got caught in the emotions and wrote this.
Date: 11/30/2016 2:23:00 AM
7 fav..... But also so sad. Hope you okay.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/30/2016 10:21:00 AM
Thanks Darren...that song resonates at times but I am okay.
Date: 11/29/2016 10:12:00 PM
Tim, very good :-) I will save you a stack of pancakes
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/30/2016 10:20:00 AM
Thanks Eve :)
Date: 11/29/2016 10:12:00 PM
A definite 7/7!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/30/2016 10:19:00 AM
Thanks so much Rick
Date: 11/29/2016 9:21:00 PM
Loved this, a fav, in those few words, more than a song was said!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/30/2016 10:19:00 AM
Thanks my friend

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