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A sudden downpour
bounces on pavement - splashes.
rain stops quick, sun shines.

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  1. Date: 10/15/2010 8:30:00 AM
    CArol, haiku are not supposed to have titles anyway, so when you use a title for them, you simply choose that first line you wrote. In this case "a sudden downpour" I think that would be a beautiful title for this one! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/18/2010 12:25:00 PM
    I can see the drops touching the pavement with the splash back..Very descriptive work..I was delighted that you enjoyed reading of my work..Some poems come to me quite easily then there are those that I want to write but are very difficult to pull together..Sara

  1. Date: 9/16/2010 10:56:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your poetry today Carol. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol