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No Time After Time

Youth Every year I live Lasts an eternity Must I be treated like a child forever I speak no one listens Do sixteen year olds have no rights I know I have lived Adults tell me "one day you will understand" "wait till you have kids of your own" They tell me what to eat What to wear When to go Who I can hang with When to come home If only I was a grown up Things would be so different The Elder Every year Faster than the last It seems but hours ago I was so young Living my dreams The captain of my world I thought I would live forever Time is a cruel master Sapping my strength Leaving this disintegrating shell When I speak no one listens Someone else tells me they know best They decide what I wear Who I see Where I go. When did I lose control Why am I treated like a child My body betrays me Filled with pain Each year Feels like an eternity It is my time to go The Dead This thing I feared Has finally come The end is the beginning I am not scared A new body was prepared The energy of youth Paired with all I have learned A new beginning New dreams to live My Savior promised to forgive I approach God's throne Thankfully not alone Jesus here by my side On God's face a smile He says come sit for a while Today there is no rush No longer slave to time It doesn't pass too slow It won't vanish fast In fact it no longer exists Like my old body it has passed a way In the end God has the final say Talking To Yourself Contest Sponsor; Craig Cornish

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Date: 7/11/2013 10:38:00 PM
an excellent "talking to yourself" winning poem.... Congratulations, always & forever ~ Linda
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/12/2013 6:49:00 AM
Thanks Linda
Date: 7/11/2013 8:59:00 AM
Well done Richard. Congrats on your well deserved win. AO
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/11/2013 9:10:00 AM
Thanks A.O
Date: 7/9/2013 10:49:00 AM
Richard so enjoyed your poem. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/11/2013 9:11:00 AM
Warm smile back to you.
Date: 7/9/2013 12:12:00 AM
your creativity shines, both simple and sophisticated all at once... congratulations, richard!..:) huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/9/2013 6:37:00 AM
Good. Morning and thanks so much for all your visits and kind comments.
Date: 6/28/2013 7:55:00 AM
very nicely done.good luck in the contest,even though you don't need luck.You have skill.Love Colleen
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/28/2013 8:05:00 AM
Hi Colleen, so nice to have your visit, I hope you are feeling better.
Date: 6/28/2013 7:08:00 AM
hi Richard, I remember the song of "Father and Son" by Cat Stevens. I love this, like a song humming on my ears. Nice piece!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/28/2013 7:26:00 AM
Hi Elai I think your new picture is cute. I am not familiar with tha song, I do however appreciate the kind comment.
Date: 6/28/2013 1:15:00 AM
Richard it is very cool that you can do this contest. It's one that I cannot do because of the "dead" part. I guess I don't have the same confidence as others as to what to say about that part! You did an excellent job with this theme. I do love that our old bodies will be done away with in the next life. That part I really am looking forward so I can be rid of my aches!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/28/2013 6:39:00 AM
Perhaps you can ask yourself questions about where am I what will happen next, what worries you, are you at peace.
Date: 6/27/2013 11:30:00 PM
We shall be changed...in the twinkling of an eye...at the last trump. The mortal will put on immortality....A superb write....the ending full of hope. Loved your comment to Drake. 100 percent true.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/28/2013 6:36:00 AM
Amen!
Date: 6/27/2013 8:32:00 PM
hi Rich: Such universal thoughts.......we change yet remain the same. Looks like a winner to me. SuZ
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/27/2013 10:49:00 PM
Thanks SuZ
Date: 6/27/2013 7:48:00 PM
Great poem. this one is a sure winner!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/27/2013 10:50:00 PM
Thanks Monterey, I will keep my fingers and toes crossed.
Date: 6/27/2013 7:46:00 PM
Hell of a conversation here. I can absolutely appreciate the ending.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/27/2013 10:51:00 PM
Thanks Drake, it is important to know your destination when you are on an important journey.

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