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No Tell Motel

There's a no tell motel Just up the road a bit It cherishes its secrets Like a horse chomps on its bits The rooms are small and squallid With a queen size mattress strewn Across the age worn carpet That has stories to exhume The walls have needed painting Some twenty years or more But dingy is as dingy does The guests don't ask for more And that wall mounted television No antenna there for years But movies still play on demand They don't star Richard Gere That old man at the counter He's leering at some folks But twenty's buys his silence For all us respectable folks.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/23/2014 8:57:00 AM
Hi Brenda, This was unique and clever. Very good write:~) Thanks so much for sharing this with us here. Congrats on this being featured. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/22/2014 11:52:00 AM
BRENDA, Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Hope you are enjoying the exposure. Hugs & Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/22/2014 11:38:00 AM
Hi Brenda, nice to know you. You splendidly brought back an era that may not exist. This great poem poem should serve as a souvenir. Great Write.
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Date: 5/20/2014 1:32:00 AM
If walls could talk I'm sure we would be let in on all the secrets. I'm sure walls wouldn't be corrupted by any twenties
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Date: 5/18/2014 11:50:00 PM
Well done without being vulgar.
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Date: 10/16/2013 8:08:00 PM
Just stopping by to say Hi this evening it's been too long since I have read your fine verses. Light & Love
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:27:00 AM
very cool write brenda Luv*Skat
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:36:00 PM
That last line is a gut buster...classic good poem.
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:01:00 PM
hahaha. I had a good chuckle on this one. Nice one, Brenda. :))
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