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No Teddy Bear

The youngest daughter in a family of five liked to hide in the closet. Quietly grinning. Toys on her shelf all fallen – Bubblegum stuck in her hair. With no teddy bear She fed ducks in the darkness – Her family went seeking. With children at home, She met her friends in the street. They laughed loudly together. Ó December 4, 2011 Dane Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest Ancient Song Sponsored by: ^Rick Parise

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Date: 12/8/2011 5:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in ^Rick's contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/8/2011 4:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win x
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Date: 12/7/2011 6:38:00 PM
"Bubblegum stuck in her hair." Lol. Great job Dane, but no teddy bear, shucks! Congrats. on your worthy poem's win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/7/2011 5:49:00 PM
sad, confused, mysterious as is the child aye? so much here in so few words...Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 12/4/2011 5:12:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Good luck in the contest..That gum in hair is something else..I have experienced that one with one of my girls..Short short hair that year..Sara
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