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No Surrender

Slowly crawling out from under the covers Ice cold, thinking about our days as lovers I had to let you go, I was so afraid of me I didn't stop loving you, I set you free I miss the look of surrender in your eyes You gave a world to me, I now despise That no longer can I taste passionate flavor Upon crimson lips that once i could savor Tired of lying, had to walk out the door What once was easy was now a chore I stepped out from deep inside my mind Times were crazy, you were one of a kind But ships have to sail, and stones do sink You were not good for me, that I do think Walking away from the eyes of a hurricane Leaving a love that made me go insane I'm wrapped up, I'm bundled, tied in a knot Trying to escape a lover, I have not forgot Torn and twisted you were a devil in disguise I'm missing the taste of surrender in your thighs

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/2/2015 12:38:00 AM

Congrats on big win CT,, AWESOME !!

Skat A

Date: 3/1/2015 7:57:00 PM

C.T., CONGRATS on your win. ThanXs for supporting my contest ~ SKAT ~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2014 8:55:00 AM

:) LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2014 8:45:00 AM

No it does not matter, to answer your question...Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2014 8:44:00 AM

Hi C & T, thank you for the reply

Jan Allison

Date: 8/17/2014 4:56:00 PM

way to go you two fabulous to see this as poem of the day my friends:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Ct Duet
Date: 8/17/2014 6:56:00 PM

Thank you Jan......big smile and hugs Tim

Christine Costello

Date: 8/17/2014 10:29:00 AM

very nice collaboration-love the imagery. Congrats :-)Christine

Ct Duet
Date: 8/17/2014 6:54:00 PM

Thank you Christine from Casarah and me...hugs Tim

Race Benoit

Date: 8/17/2014 8:46:00 AM

Excellent poetry, and I agree with Robert, it could have been the poem of the week. One phrase comes to me which made the leaving profound. "Tired of lying, had to walk out the door / What once was easy was now a chore. Again.Excellent!!

Ct Duet
Date: 8/17/2014 6:52:00 PM

Thank you Race...it is much appreciated....Casarah & Tim

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/17/2014 8:17:00 AM

Truly an amazing write. Could easily be Poem of the Week in my opinion.. Huge congrats, a team that shines ever so brightly!!

Ct Duet
Date: 8/17/2014 6:51:00 PM

Thanks Robert from both Casarah and me....Tim....I think POD is my poem...lol

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/17/2014 6:41:00 AM

Hmmmmmmm....surrender in eyes and thighs...sweet indeed. Surrender is sweet...so is victory. Each has its time and its flavor to relish. This was a great collab by the two of you. You make one hell of a team. Congrats of POTD.

Ct Duet
Date: 8/17/2014 6:50:00 PM

We had so much fun Eileen...We all would love to surrender to someone....hugs

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/17/2014 2:29:00 AM

Well done CT... Congrats! on the poem of the day... Verlena

Ct Duet
Date: 8/17/2014 6:48:00 PM

Thank you very much Verlena !!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/17/2014 12:01:00 AM

I enjoyed this... you're very talented. God bless you both. Happy writing and love & prayers.... Gina

Tim Smith
Date: 8/17/2014 1:24:00 AM

Thank you Regina from both Casarah and myself...hugs Tim

Peter Dome

Date: 8/16/2014 8:40:00 AM

Boy this is incredible. well done both of you. Some wonderful but sad lines I can relate too. your talent shines through.Felt it in my heart, that's what great poetry is all about. best wishes. Pete.

Ct Duet
Date: 8/16/2014 10:56:00 PM

Thank you my friend from both Casarah and myself...cheers Tim

Jan Allison

Date: 8/16/2014 5:06:00 AM

WOW Tim and Cas what a deep passionate write that is tinged with a sad undercurrent and has some incredible imagery! Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 8/16/2014 3:11:00 PM

She can go on any time she likes...I think it is difficult with her internet...Tim

Tim Smith
Date: 8/16/2014 8:08:00 AM

Thanks Jan....It was a fun to do together....hugs Tim

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/16/2014 12:06:00 AM

Wow CT its a real passionate one, although sad, N a longing to surrender, hv a great day!

Tim Smith
Date: 8/16/2014 8:06:00 AM

Thank you....You have a great day as well....hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2014 9:30:00 PM

Who is this??? LOL.... C or T... :) Linda

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2014 10:43:00 AM

Darren and I had access to the account so we could both comment Cas - you could do the same:-) Hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 8/16/2014 8:06:00 AM

Yes your smile is delightful :)

Casarah Nance
Date: 8/16/2014 6:48:00 AM

would it matter ? :) Tim does the comments on the duet account btw. but you do have a nice smile ;)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2014 9:02:00 PM

WOW,, so sweet and romantic. Sad, to set a feeling and taste like this free.... I see why it would be hard to forget... Enjoyed...Linda

Ct Duet
Date: 8/15/2014 9:22:00 PM

Thank You Linda...some things are harder to forget than others...Like your beautiful smile :)