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I wish we had a little snow; But nothing here! I do not know Why not this year; why not at all? I’d love to play and have a ball. A snowy day, what a delight. The child in me, from morn till night, Would happily skate on the ice, And build snowmen. That would be nice. It hasn’t snowed since don’t know when! * It really doesn't snow here : ( for Isaiah's contest

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Date: 2/15/2015 10:18:00 AM
Jack This is a sweet lovely win. *Skat LOVE*
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Date: 2/3/2015 6:26:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..You got the snow though..Sara
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Date: 2/3/2015 4:33:00 AM
Snowing i love the most Jack,, We had a fresh snowfall in himachal in India yesterday also,,ur poem is so beautiful ! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 2/2/2015 9:22:00 PM
I can relate, Jack. I don't think I'll be seeing snow anytime soon. Although growing up in Miami, we had snow one year. I think it was 1977 or '78. It fell and melted right away, but I was thrilled! Congrats on your win...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/2/2015 12:10:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/30/2015 10:22:00 AM
Jack, don't wish snow for although it can be beautiful it can be horrible also like today I am snowed in . . . anyways your poem is just delightful in every way, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
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Date: 1/30/2015 7:53:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem, Jack! and I can well relate to it since in Malta it never snows, although we do get hail sometimes. All the best. // paul
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Date: 1/29/2015 8:08:00 PM
Be careful what you ask for jack. I fear that February may attack. But I have four fingers I keep crossed. Hoping to keep at bay, Jack Frost. I just noticed your comment that it doesn't snow there. I'm a Minnesota boy, wanna trade places? :) Stay cool.
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Date: 1/29/2015 6:56:00 PM
Nice flow of words and a pleasant sounding poem. Emile.
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Date: 1/29/2015 6:34:00 PM
I haven't seen any snow either, Jack and it is likely that there won't be any but sometimes we get a surprise in March. They are having lots of snow on the east coast but nothing here in the west. Thanks for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/29/2015 5:26:00 PM
Just a flurry of snow here today Jack - delightful read - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/29/2015 4:23:00 PM
no snow here either Jack great pen hugs
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