No Schengen Treaty

Passport control Angels scrutinize For invalid documents While weary travellers wait At heaven’s door.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2023 12:39:00 PM

oh this paints a funny picture. At last I found one I have not seen!

Paul Callus
Date: 12/24/2023 2:47:00 PM

Sorry for the very late reply, Andrea; your comments must have eluded my security cameras :) Thank you for stopping by. I'm taking this opportunity to wish you and your family a joyous and blessed Christmas. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/10/2014 3:53:00 AM

hahahahhaha... i love how the pictures are.. :D angels and heaven both elicits two or three meanings for me.. :D, olive eloisa.. :D

Paul Callus
Date: 5/10/2014 4:59:00 AM

Hi dearie...so nice to have you visiting again today! I am sure you'll be able to use the fast lane :) cu // paul

Roy Jerden

Date: 3/19/2014 9:08:00 PM

At least you're in the right line. Do they serve lunch? Cheers, Roy

Paul Callus
Date: 3/20/2014 12:21:00 PM

Hi Roy ... we meet again. As for lunch, there might be some for those in the long queue; others might not need any if they go through the fast lane :) // paul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/16/2014 11:32:00 AM

I am from Malta dear lord..Pls let me pass without scrutinizing..I 'm Schengen friendly..Please let me pass : )..I have some other friends here..Pls can they follow? : ). Tnks for sharing this post ..You put a smile on my face.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/16/2014 12:18:00 PM

Hi Charma. If it were up to me there would be no problem; unfortunately I am not the Lord! I too will have to present my passport :) Hope you had a nice weekend. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/16/2014 9:45:00 AM

- I hope I do not need my passport to get through the pearly gates. - Skillfully written Paul. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 3/16/2014 10:50:00 AM

Once again txs for your welcome visit and lovely comments. Nice Sunday to you, too. /x/ paul