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No Scar Is Deeper Than This One

When nobody embraced you to stop those tears from falling and restore your sense of existence which relied on prayer, not entirely on my comprehension and thought; this guilt was my eternal damnation not to have given an apology in a timely manner.... No scar is deeper than this one when the weight of remorse can't be laid to rest, long before I said all the unpleasant words, I should have considered kindness, and took a closer look at the pitiful one; I ask myself how I resorted to madness! Some men intentionally hurt their sweethearts, feeling no compassion in their accusations, and keep on lashing at them as if they were the guilty ones; o most of us are the delirious fools acting on a stage without an audience, where we don't see ourselves as we actually are, weakening the fortitudes of those we should love and hold to our chests! No scar is deeper than this one, hidden in shame for the fear of revealing its pain... somewhat indignant and reluctant to come out and face alone the punishment for its malevolent intent; and what can torment us is this conscience tarnished by stain, so why be heartless and uncaring when love can heal our hurt? Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 6/6/2009 1:58:00 AM
a great powerful poem, it is true sometimes people lash out at others but it does not resolve anything, love and compassion is better but it's not always easy, we all have said things we should not of said at one time or another, but God loves us and with his help we can all change we can love with his his love, some hutsful things cuts deeper than a knife, we all have a chance to start again, God gave me healing and his peace through all my heartache, God bless you from diane
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