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In the womb there was no room for a babe to thrive and bloom. By the will of God conceived, as a regretful burden perceived by a single mom who can't comprehend generational blessings she's chosen to end. Fearful tears drip down. Who could care? She feels so trapped, but the clinic is there. "It's not human yet," "You'll feel relieved." Each familiar-as-Hitler lie is believed. As time elapses, the loss has begotten trauma and shame that won't be forgotten. In the womb there was no room. The chamber of life became an empty tomb. ------------------------ In the inn there was no room for the babe in Mary's womb. By the spirit of God conceived, in a filthy manger received to a virgin mother whose eyes behold the very Savior the prophets foretold! With joyful tears, she praises the Lord. Though fearful, she chooses to trust His word, believing her Jesus' blood sacrifice would pardon her sin and give her new life. His cruel death was mocked, but Jesus is risen for generations of sinners, forever forgiven! In the inn there was no room. From the chamber of death, life rose from the tomb!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/22/2019 9:32:00 PM
This is awsum..altho, very tragic and dark with gloom...which is great in any write..a new beginning with the end..turns dark to bright. ;-)
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/22/2019 11:24:00 PM
Thanks, Kenneth.
Date: 12/22/2019 3:17:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Juliet
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/22/2019 11:24:00 PM
Thanks, Gregory.
Date: 12/22/2019 2:46:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win!;)
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/22/2019 11:24:00 PM
Thanks, Brenda.
Date: 1/28/2014 3:17:00 PM
Juliet, CONGRAT, in the any poem goes contest. Have yourself a nice sunny day....... SKAT
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 3/14/2014 3:46:00 PM
Thanks, SKAT. You too!
Date: 1/8/2014 2:28:00 PM
A very inspirational poem with a powerful message. Very well expressed, Juliet! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you very much for the kind congrats on my poem.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 3/14/2014 3:45:00 PM
Thanks, Kelly. www.40daysforlife.com
Date: 1/5/2014 1:09:00 AM
Very interesting and unique write, congrats on the win, Juliet
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 3/14/2014 3:43:00 PM
Thanks, Dr.
Date: 1/3/2014 9:25:00 PM
congrats on a great win Juliet..
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 3/14/2014 3:42:00 PM
Thanks, Joseph. www.40daysforlife.com
Date: 1/3/2014 9:04:00 PM
Hi Juliet, Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest and I. I will miss you, have yourself an awesome 2014.. Always~ LINDA
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 1/3/2014 11:49:00 PM
Thanks so much, Linda! Miss me? Are you going away? Hugs and kisses, Juliet.
Date: 12/28/2013 8:26:00 AM
amen, awesome write, and awesome how we being the dirty manger the lord would come and dwell within us that me might reveal his sons glory to a dark deceived world,,
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Date: 12/24/2013 2:05:00 AM
This is sooo very good Juliet, I love the comparisons youve portrayed here, very creative and very powerful, i wrote a poem called Whats Lost that you might enjoy similar to your first portrayal, merry Christmas,Carl
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Date: 12/24/2013 1:36:00 AM
Juliet, Guess what? , The end of the year is approaching :) and there's no way I'm letting this year end, without dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTAMS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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Date: 12/23/2013 1:01:00 AM
what a contrast this carries! As Joseph says, a powerful piece !! Merry Christmas to you, sweetie.
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Date: 12/22/2013 7:22:00 PM
the comparison was powerful Juliet....awesome piece...Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/22/2013 6:44:00 PM
Every new life brings again the hope of redemption. Happy Holidays Light & Love
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Date: 12/19/2013 5:04:00 PM
Now Juliet, This is a masterpiece. You are truly blessed. Just a wonderful poem....Hugs....Roger
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Date: 12/18/2013 4:36:00 PM
very clever write
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Date: 12/17/2013 9:56:00 PM
Juliet......Sacred And Stellar!! Life.....meant to be experienced! Merry Christmas, chuck.......ps...if u have time pleased check out: " All They Could Have Been" on my page, thanks
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