No Peeking

Up in the attic Under the bed Back of the closet Out in the shed Santa is coming In just a few days Presents stay hidden This much I pray Letters were sent An email or two Wishes for Christmas Hoping come true Stay out of my bedroom Don't go in the den Children are peeking Christmas is when?

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Funom Makama

Date: 12/24/2015 6:36:00 AM

This is lovely. Wishing you a wonderful christmas season and a fulfilling new year.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/22/2015 2:45:00 PM

- A cute poem, Tim - Provides childhood memories :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/20/2015 12:15:00 AM

Peek -a -boo I made it through , found my present kuk ku ku : ). Sweet poem. I love peeking for my presents before Christmas, then re-close them and pretend I didnt ser : )..

Tim Smith
Date: 12/20/2015 12:18:00 AM

: ))

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 12/20/2015 12:16:00 AM

see them

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/20/2015 12:09:00 AM

I couldn't help myself, I peeked and glad I did great Xmas poem!!!!

Tim Smith
Date: 12/20/2015 12:19:00 AM

Hope you didn't find the Red Rider Bb gun

Jan Allison

Date: 12/19/2015 7:38:00 PM

Made me smile Tim hubby was telling me about our friend - he has brought his partner presents but he can't remember where he has hidden them and she wouldn't even dream of searching for them lol lol:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/19/2015 6:55:00 PM

very cute, tim! hope the gifts stay hidden! have a wonderful holiday...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/19/2015 6:31:00 PM

so charmed by this, tim... have a peek-a-boo christmas!..huggs