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No One's Perfect

Pursuing fantasies of youth, love becomes an impassioned goal. And as fledgling feelings fly free, they influence both heart and soul. Plagued by uncertainty and doubt fantasies carry little clout. And though you yearn for happiness, you need time to figure things out. Playing Russian roulette with fate, you give the cylinder a spin. But taking risks with your feelings, doesn't guarantee a surefire win. It's okay to want more than dreams, life's not meant to be slept away. But do not mistake lust for love, no matter what your heart may say. Forget the past; no one's perfect; sometimes, dreams simply fall apart. And as hope gathers the pieces, time starts to mend your broken heart. (Quatrain) 6/9/2015

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Date: 3/4/2018 10:39:00 PM
Wow - "Playing Russian-roulette with fate you give life’s cylinder a spin. For taking risks with your feelings may be your only way you win." Powerful imagery, Emile.
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Date: 3/5/2018 9:23:00 AM
Thanks Line, I truly appreciate your support and encouragement my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/10/2015 7:10:00 PM
perfectly painted emile perfection is beyond our grasp yet some look down their noses claiming a step above another pride is their downfall we all seek love in the tenderness of beauty it shines an amazing light love this piece from you dear friend wishing you a beautiful day
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/11/2015 8:14:00 AM
Thank you Liam, for taking the time to give me such a encouraging review, Emile.
Date: 6/10/2015 1:32:00 AM
So true, no one's perfect but people still try yo be. There is a lot of wisdom in your words, lust for love, so true today, and through it we have so many unplanned children. I love the flow of this. very well done. excellent piece. best wishes. Pete.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/10/2015 7:36:00 AM
Thanks Peter, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 6/9/2015 12:26:00 PM
advice was never given in a lovelier way than through poetry like this, Emile!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/9/2015 2:36:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 6/9/2015 9:26:00 AM
stirring work that soothes a lonely heart.. so well conveyed, emile.. huggs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/9/2015 10:40:00 AM
Thanks so much Nette, your comments are always welcome. Emile.

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