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Strolling along the hot beach Our feet are covered with sand, The air is filled with romance As we’re walking hand in hand. Sitting by the warm fire As we are sipping our wine, You kiss me oh so gently Sending shivers down my spine. Listening, as animals sing Their music all through the night, It is only you and I There is no one else in sight. On a deserted island Wanting your passionate love, The moon above shines brightly In the dark, black sky above. Maybe it’s just a great dream Yet hoping it will come true, Wanting to share this moment I’d only share it with you!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/3/2010 10:45:00 AM
enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 9/24/2010 7:52:00 AM
beautiful rhyme, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/23/2010 12:11:00 PM
Many congratulations Kelly on your win in Catie's lovely contest. Lovely warm tender loving moments >> James
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations Kelly for your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Love Notes". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2010 9:05:00 PM
This is a very sweet poem, Kelly, My congratulations for your win in this contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/22/2010 8:26:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kelly. Truly a beautiful love poem. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 9/22/2010 2:19:00 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest, kelly
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Date: 9/22/2010 2:00:00 PM
Congrats Kelly on your big win in the Love Notes contest... a wonderful write and win to enjoy with luv...
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:41:00 AM
Congratulations Kelly on your win in Tavarus Moreland's contest "Is She The One". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2010 1:44:00 PM
Congrats Kelly on your HM in Tavarus's contest.. awesome write... wonderful win.. enjoy..with luv..
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Date: 7/13/2010 2:07:00 PM
Hi Kelly, thank you for entering my contest, Steamy Summer Heat, however, the poem must be written in the form Sonnet, and must be a new poem for this contest only. All this is in the contest description. This is still a beautiful poem, but not for this particular contest. And I cannot consider it for the contest. Why not remove it and try to write a sonnet. Love Constance
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Date: 10/3/2009 5:44:00 AM
Dreamy delightful poem Kelly, oh my where is this island >> James
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