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No One At the Window

Drapeless window cries Laughter turns to emptiness U-Haul moves our lives... by: iolanda scripca for Michael's Contest "A Haiku From My Window"

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Demetrius Curton

Date: 1/27/2014 2:38:00 PM

It waz deep and I felt it because I had to take a hard move to a new and wasnt easy but great poem

John Freeman

Date: 8/2/2011 10:20:00 AM

Beautiful and smart Haiku Iolandra! Good Luck! Congratulations on your worthy poem's capture of the first round. Agape, Moses

Elaine George

Date: 8/2/2011 4:17:00 AM

Superb writingIolanda. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/2/2011 2:46:00 PM

Sad tale - I believe it is about moving - am I right? Congratulations on being featured. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Rockman Pritts

Date: 6/28/2011 7:30:00 PM

Sorry for the multiple comments. The captch kept saying it was incorrect. Rockman.

Rockman Pritts

Date: 6/28/2011 7:27:00 PM

Congrats on your featured poem. I really enjoyed this one. Rockman.

Rockman Pritts

Date: 6/28/2011 7:26:00 PM

Congrats on your featured poem. I really enjoyed this one. Rockman.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 6/28/2011 6:57:00 PM

Great one!!!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 6/28/2011 6:56:00 PM

Great one!!!

Ashley Plotczyk

Date: 6/28/2011 6:00:00 PM

Touching. Congrats. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/28/2011 5:41:00 AM

My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Iolanda

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/27/2011 6:18:00 PM

Congrats on the feature iolanda. A story in three lines. Vince

Judy Konos

Date: 6/27/2011 6:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured....and wow...this is fantastic....so little says so much.....thank you

Judy Konos

Date: 6/27/2011 6:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured....and wow...this is fantastic....so little says so much.....thank you

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/27/2011 5:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your well written poetry being featured this week Iolanda. Love, Carol

Cherie Durbin

Date: 4/15/2011 4:52:00 AM

Moving day is sad...but exciting, too!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/23/2011 5:44:00 AM

Belated congratulations on your placement Iolanda, in the contest "An Haiku From Your Window" sponsored by Michael J. Falotico. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 2/13/2011 2:27:00 PM

Congratulations Iolanda on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/12/2011 10:58:00 AM

and the outlines where pictures hung for years and years. i know the picture. jhl

Elaine George

Date: 2/9/2011 4:15:00 AM

Sensational Senryu, dear Iolanda. Many congrats on your BIG WIN! LAINIE

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/8/2011 8:04:00 PM

Many congratulations for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2011 2:52:00 PM

This is so interesting, Yolanda. So what is the story? Is it your neighbor you see moving out? it's not you, is it? Congratulations on your big win. LUv, Andrea

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/8/2011 2:29:00 PM

I loved the angel you took in this write, thank you for supporting my contest...with love Michael

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/8/2011 9:20:00 AM

Hi Iolanda - CONGRATULATIONS on your BIG WIN in Michael's contest. Best wishes, KC

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/8/2011 8:29:00 AM

Such a heart touching poem. Well deserving a winning place! Best wishes, Iolanda and congratulations!