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No One

Walking the streets up and down, my own image fades on car mirrors. A wandering ghost with no bound, sadly cut by invisible scissors. What in life I would call disgrace, come to me in sharp knives. This cold winter that eats my face, with no color and no jives. And even the more I try to scape, there is no run away for me, from this vague space called life. No matter what path I shall take, I find no one there but thee, for the no one me lacking rife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/10/2016 11:24:00 AM
I liked this poem of yours Manoel
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Date: 2/23/2011 8:19:00 AM
I love your metaphors! Nice work
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Date: 2/19/2011 6:51:00 PM
Very interesting sonnet with nice rhyming, Manoel
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Date: 2/19/2011 6:30:00 AM
Sad. This poet may, like me, be suffering depression from this terribly long winter. "I find no one there but thee"...this sounds like Deity, and if so, I agree. Love, Dave
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Date: 2/19/2011 6:17:00 AM
Good poem, somewhat sad. Your never alone :)
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