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Your words they stand eternally, They’re words that cannot simply leave They sink into my memory Like stones set on misery Tried to make some good of them, Found it hard to call you a friend Your truth was so bold Time lost in their cold Why do we smile so easy For a photograph? Why can’t life just be Like a photograph? You say no offense No offense taken, No, no heart broken I’m strong, oh I’m stronger than the mouth that spoke No heart broken Do not awaken A soul that’s about to choke- Cause I will smile on... I can't be what you make of me I will smile on No offense taken, with me No offense taken, with me Ghosts are haunting all my fears Bursting at the gleam of tears Can’t you see I’ve lived by it? Made use of it, use of it? Oh, has it changed you around? No, don’t try to take it down The hurt is set in stone So let it sink alone Why do we smile so easy For a photograph? Why can’t life just be Like a photograph? No offense taken, No, no heart broken I’m strong, oh I’m stronger than the mouth that spoke No heart broken Do not awaken A soul that’s about to choke- I will smile on I won't be what you make of me I will smile on No offense taken with me No offense taken With me, With me, With me…

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Date: 3/2/2018 4:48:00 AM
Hi Laura Many people have ideas and thoughts but only few have the tongue which give vent to their feelings.........A beautiful write....... i hope all all your peoms would be nice but can you mention some so that i can select easily...
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Date: 8/1/2016 11:35:00 AM
So touching, and so honest, Laura. The part about the photograph really got to me ... how often is a smile obligatory as opposed to natural? And sometimes out perceptions of a photograph seem so much grander, than the actual moment it captured ... how have you been lately, my friend? I know I haven't been on Soup very much lately ...
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/1/2016 2:24:00 PM
Timothy!!! I have missed ya and your thoughtful comments. I completely understand - life keeps us busy my friend! I've been doing alright - it's been a really rough month-busy and stressful- nevertheless I'm still kickin it. (: Hope you are doing well, and yay, your bday is soon! Hehe. I will definitely be back reading your page when I have the chance. Stay sweet and awesome! <3~Laura
Date: 7/27/2016 7:17:00 PM
Laura, you are a sensitive soul. You are trying to convince yourself, but life is not so easy like a photo. This we do know. You make me think of how nothing is just good. It all comes with the other side. I just wanted you to know I am OK. I have missed reading your wonderful poetry. I have been working on a huge writing project at work, so my creative energy has been sapped. May peace be with you always and know you have a fan club here!!!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/1/2016 2:19:00 PM
I believe a lot of poets have the sensitive soul. Thank you for your immensely kind words. I've missed you, and I am glad you are doing OK. I should send you an email sometime, catch up on what's been going on with your life. Much love, my friend. <3~Laura
Date: 7/27/2016 3:12:00 AM
Very very strong form here Laura, the " gritted teeth" delivery is so engaging, the repetitions , always enforcing always reaffirming the point....great read Laura...
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/1/2016 2:17:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Ian! Thought of making this into the song, though it's on the back-burner atm. <3~Laura

Book: Shattered Sighs