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No Newton Around

So many apples falling from trees to the ground.... no Newton around © kashinath karmakar (20th May 2011) ============================ Placement: 7th;(May 2011) Contest:Apples?Oranges? Sponsor:Carol Brown

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2013 8:46:00 PM

Kashinath. I changed that first haiku out of the worst poem contest for the Crustacean , another haiku of mine that really was not up to par for my AGE. hahaha

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2011 11:24:00 PM

This was so clever. A poem that well deserved to be on the winners' list. Congratulations, Kash. By the way, I cannot reply to your soupmail today. The words ran far into the right margin and I could not see the reply key. that is why you didn't hear from me today and also I have not really had time to do anything all day until now! Hope you had a good day!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/28/2011 11:51:00 PM

nice one , kashi... special congrats! :) huggs

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/28/2011 8:42:00 PM

Congrats on your clever piece being a winner. Well done. Bg

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/28/2011 8:41:00 PM

Congrats Kash on a super win in Carol's contest..another beauty luv.. enjoy..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/28/2011 4:08:00 PM

My Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, kashinath

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/28/2011 2:19:00 PM

A very witty write on this theme.l.Congrats Kashi on your win in carol's contest. gautami

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 5/28/2011 12:11:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest with this witty take on the theme...

Jack Horne

Date: 5/28/2011 11:00:00 AM

Many congratulations on both your wins, Kash : )

John Freeman

Date: 5/28/2011 6:50:00 AM

Kashinath, great job, good to see you poem in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/28/2011 5:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in my contest Kashinath. I thank you so much for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/23/2011 9:36:00 AM

well I wish I was there so I could have gotten all those apples and made apple pie, lol! Enjoyed this one Kashinath! :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/23/2011 5:01:00 AM

hehe, love the wit Kash :) thanks for the smiles while at work with this one.. Enjoy the week ahead :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/21/2011 5:18:00 PM

Dear Kash- How'd you know my mother n law was hiding in India? You are hysterical! She'll need a fresh set of clothes and a warm place to sleep....call her please....1-800-helpmymom!! About this senryu....seriously-I enjoyed the Newton approach. I like everything science and so this jumps out and grabs me! Curious who your favorite published poet is? Who inspires u!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/21/2011 6:30:00 AM

Lovely humor and wit, kashinath

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/20/2011 11:45:00 PM

* “Who Is Newton??? * Is He The One They Named The Cookie After * Fig Newton??? * Smile * Just Having A Bit of Fun Dear Kashie * Again I Find A Vein of Passion Amid This Short Sweeet Verse * Someone Needs to Locate Dear Sir Issac * So He Can Throw Them Into Rainbow Sky * And If They Return Then * He'll Make Their Dreams Come True & Turn Them Into A Sweeet Apple Pie * MmM * Smile * Wonderful Poem Kash * Sincerely Yours * Sarah” *

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2011 11:31:00 PM

hey, very cool, very clever. It was great to see you putting up two new poems tonight. Look at me. Been here three hours now,trying to make up for what little I did yesterday. I may be here at least till 1!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/20/2011 10:27:00 PM

Isn't it funny how gravity always existed, but Newton was the first to make a formal observation of it, Kash? Enjoyed your senryu and wish you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/20/2011 10:17:00 PM

but his theory is always connected to apples Kash.. a great Haiku for the contest for Carol... good luck my friend.. luv..

Kash Poet

Date: 5/20/2011 7:18:00 PM

We need more Newtons.