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"no More" the Revolution of a Boarding School

I think they would agree No shown sympathy Destruction slips through bloody teeth Holes where hearts are supposed to be And I need to breath But the hand is on my throat Musical reservations of my real anger Keep sanity’s cries heard In hot ears Control is lost Black blood boils In veins With every intention of emptying for this cause My skull is leaking Vapors of vicious retaliation Marinating a training brain Watering red eyes Seeing similar atrocities Don’t you believe That even without a tail A bee could sting Even with out teeth A dog would bite 3rd party chaos Cowards cause Will be stopped By a body tired A soul shaken This occurrence Is your last attack on happiness Bury your lies Hide yourself I’m not stable anymore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/14/2010 1:35:00 PM
A good piece. I thought the repression was expressed very well, with hope and the strong attacking adjectives, it gave it bite :)
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Date: 3/23/2010 10:16:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Julian. I enjoyed reading this piece. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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