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"No More" the revolution of a boarding school

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"No More" the revolution of a boarding school

I think they would agree
No shown sympathy
Destruction slips through bloody teeth
Holes where hearts are supposed to be
And I need to breath

But the hand is on my throat
Musical reservations of my real anger
Keep sanity’s cries heard
In hot ears

Control is lost
Black blood boils
In veins 
With every intention of emptying for this cause

My skull is leaking
Vapors of vicious retaliation
Marinating a training brain
Watering red eyes
Seeing similar atrocities

Don’t you believe
That even without a tail
A bee could sting
Even with out teeth
A dog would bite

3rd party chaos
Cowards cause
Will be stopped
By a body tired
A soul shaken
This occurrence 
Is your last attack on happiness
Bury your lies
Hide yourself
I’m not stable anymore

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  1. Date: 8/14/2010 1:35:00 PM
    A good piece. I thought the repression was expressed very well, with hope and the strong attacking adjectives, it gave it bite :)

  1. Date: 3/23/2010 10:16:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Julian. I enjoyed reading this piece. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol