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No More Pain

Tears fall like morning rain Trying to wash away your pain It's ok, I'm not alone The angels took me to their home Try not to worry, dont be sad I love you loads, dear mum and dad Inner peace I hope you'll find I'll never wander from your mind Remember all the happy things Like when you pushed me on the swings Fond memories I know you'll share Like the times you took me to the fair I'll always be your little girl The one you brought into this world So don't be sad, dont be afraid Please tell all the friends I made I love them all, they need not worry and not to forget me in a hurry I'm feeling fine I have no pain 1 day we'll all be together again. William Duffy.

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William Duffy

Date: 9/1/2014 3:13:00 PM

Hi Darlene, I'm so sorry to hear of your loss x I wrote this when a young girl was killed in an accident at school. I hope this does not offend anyone who has lost a child. I am lucky too have my daughters xx

Darlene Gifford

Date: 9/1/2014 3:03:00 PM

A heart wrenching poem. To lose a child is the worst kind of agony. I'm so sorry for your loss if you were writing about yours? I started writing humorous poems to entertain my son who was home a lot with illness (CF) He died when he was 13. Just getting interested in girls! Writing is a great way of dealing with grief. God Bless!

Christine Costello

Date: 9/1/2014 11:11:00 AM

This is a beautiful write-I find myself writing about death/addiction/depression as unfortunately those have been themes in my life. read my Depression or About you I had a dream poems at your leisure. :-) Christine