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No More Icicles

Sitting on this roof, seeing the colored lights in neighboring windows finding frosted panes in abstract happiness, as winter’s wind howls about my face Speakers blare in cramping holiday tones, (What’s so wonderful about it - this time of year?) Shingles damp and slippery, still I hold on for dear life Fingers numb but clinging, for without my seated sadness on this peak above chimney ash watching streams finding the edge how else would those muddied tear drop icicles form? - Then I hear it on shivering vibrations A voice from - out there - somewhere A shadow beneath a flickering street light Footprints in circles about the square Moving in my direction My silhouette on white cloud shimmies A little to the side, for a better view Wings - it has - she has wings I blink a frozen eyelash - she is sitting next to me A warm, feathery quilted wing about my shoulders Chilled cheeks burn as I smile and my heart melts as she whispers to me
“No more icicles”

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Date: 10/29/2016 12:01:00 PM
Chris, beautifully penned , oh I would be those wings of comfort any day, well done ~
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Chris Green
Date: 10/31/2016 5:49:00 AM
Thank you so very much Broken Wing for you kind thoughts and comments.
Date: 10/28/2016 7:46:00 PM
you think in abstract vividness. that's what gets your writing noticed . flowing with universal thoughts. you pay homage to the artistic God. Special and unique. . your writing is revealed....truely.... I bow to your artistic style.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/31/2016 6:05:00 AM
Thanks so much my artistic friend for your humbling comments. Woman admirers, oh well, I guess I do and I'm not going to complain about it. :)
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Holly Bohto
Date: 10/28/2016 7:52:00 PM
and I see. you have woman admirers. setting there pants on fire. there thoughts rewired.. it makes me laugh. ..seduction with a pen.
Date: 10/28/2016 3:54:00 PM
Objet d'art !! Feels rather familar, it's not a good season for many. You sure do know how to paint a poetic picture Chris! Oh, those holiday tunes start right after Halloween, they can get very irritating by Christmas. :) 7+ fave
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Chris Green
Date: 10/28/2016 4:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Paloma, I think it is staring already in some places and you are right, it can be very annoying at times. I appreciate your kind words about my poem.
Date: 10/28/2016 3:30:00 PM
More depth and meaning found between the lines in this spellbinding provocative poem, Chris. Wonderful writing. Lainey.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/28/2016 4:35:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful thoughts Lainey and for reading so much of my work today. I appreciate your kindness
Date: 10/28/2016 2:31:00 PM
Hi Chris - First of all, we are on the same wavelength today, I had started to write a poem that is unfinished, that included icicles. Secondly, This is just beautiful , a Favorite of mine. As people say, a 7!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/28/2016 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Heidi, I appreciate your kindness always. The really funny thing about us being on the same icicle wavelength today is, it is very hot where I am right now. :) Thanks again my friend.
Date: 10/28/2016 2:25:00 PM
cris, enjoyed the change of heart.. there is beauty in something that surprises and enchants...splendid job!..huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 10/28/2016 2:31:00 PM
Thanks so very much Nette, I always look forward to your visits to my poetry.
Date: 10/28/2016 1:47:00 PM
Indeed No More Icicles....Just melting snowflakes...ones you can skate upon with your feet..ones you can move on.....Move on.I can nearly see a feathery angel whispering such words..Love your poem.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/28/2016 2:00:00 PM
Thanks again my friend, your nice words always warm my heart.

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