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No More Hate

Close my eyes, what I see? I see you, I see me, I see death, I can't breathe, take a breath, nothing left. Open eyes, now its time, time to shine, that's my gun, oh what fun, pull the trigger, whats that word? with an N? Now you made, a mistake, that mistake, cost you bad, oh how sad, blows your mind, how this world, makes you hurl. I am here, you are there, what is next? your move tex, you have talked, a big talk, now you don't walk the walk. Must be this, that is pointed, at your face, what a waste, of a life, and tonight, its that life, I will take. Pull the trigger, it feels great, the release, all the hate, penetrates, and in case, you survive, empty case. Close my eyes, what I see? I see you, I see me, I see fate, I can't breathe, can not take, all this hate. Lets stop now, no more fights, no more cries, no more lies, lets be one, lets unite, you and me, victory!!

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Date: 11/12/2009 10:30:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Nathan. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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