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No More Daffodils

I can't write about daffodils, trees or woods. They've all been destroyed for the greater good. For roads and houses for our vile human race. It breaks my heart to see such waste. I used to wander through fields of green and gold. Now instead I walk through streets barren and cold. One day soon all beauty will disappear. And I can only hope that when that day comes I will no longer be here.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/6/2010 10:58:00 AM
Awesome feature this week Daniel. Congratulations on this fine feature. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 2/4/2010 7:03:00 PM
Congrats Daniel on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/2/2010 4:43:00 PM
Good insight on the state of the world. Congrats on the feature. Happy Writing!
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Date: 2/2/2010 11:15:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 2/1/2010 1:27:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 2/1/2010 5:27:00 AM
Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Daniel. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/1/2010 3:08:00 AM
You and I walk this barren land, just where are we going, deserved to be featured Thanks Daniel
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Date: 1/31/2010 11:45:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Daniel .Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/31/2010 6:43:00 PM
I know what you mean. I do hope though that this won't happen. Because we all need to walk through these fields sometimes. Great write! Congrats on your poem being featured this week. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/31/2010 6:10:00 PM
enjoyed reading today, hope you have a good night. congrats on the featured poem today!!
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Date: 11/18/2009 11:29:00 AM
good job. Welcome to Poetry Soup=) -Courtney-
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