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No More Crackers

I get up Tired of being lonely I will no longer feel worthless I will wash the grime from my face Watch as I pave over my gutters You will no longer see me curled up on a street corner See me shed my parrot's clothing Polly has had enough crackers Hear me pound on my chest I will be heard My mind a trancendent perch A place for eagles to rest High above the tidy Beyond insignificant drudgery Apotheosis embodied within my lines Words snatched from elongated yesterdays I shed dreams not worthy of manifestation Riches that never satiated Screams that fell on severed ears The man Slumped in the corner Turns to dust Scattered by the winds of change He was He never could be Me I originally titled the poem "I Get Up" I was inspired by a talented young poet named Stephen Kearn after reading his poem "I Sit".

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Date: 1/18/2017 5:10:00 PM
Very liberating poetry, Richard. I love the title and the mere force of saying these two words ... No more! This spirit of defiance is what lifts downtrodden souls. A wonderful testament to seek positive change. Great write. Love and peace to you.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/18/2017 8:04:00 PM
Thanks my poetic brother. Your words bolster my spirit!
Date: 1/27/2014 11:12:00 AM
Hey RL, was that you, I borrowed a cracker from, a while back as we slept on the warm floor in "Grand Central Station"?...no smiles! :-( Thank goodness, for a nice warm home now, huh?! Great Write...took me back! Robert
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/27/2014 1:14:00 PM
Nope but if you came through Kelowna I may have cut your hair. Glad to hear life has turned around for you. Thanks for all your kind comments today.
Date: 1/24/2014 7:58:00 AM
This is a fantastic statement, a declaration of freedom, that society will no longer dole out treats to keep your dreams and responses in line. Stomp on the crackers and pave yourself a new road!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/24/2014 8:17:00 AM
I agree!
Date: 1/21/2014 12:26:00 AM
Incredibly done. Such elegant declarations established here. "I shed dreams not worthy of manifestation"...indeed! Damn! I won't look at crackers the same...ever.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/21/2014 8:27:00 AM
It was a good night of comments, a double Damn! Thanks for commenting on my two poems.
Date: 1/20/2014 11:54:00 AM
You always seem to amaze me with such wonderful poetry Richard, and this is one of them.....Roger
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/20/2014 11:57:00 AM
You are very Kind Roger. Thanks again.
Date: 1/19/2014 9:57:00 AM
Interesting - if a little enigmatic. Are you comparing yourself to a parrot? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/19/2014 10:28:00 AM
Yes in our society often people are programmed to be a certain way. A parrots clothes are colorful and appear to be individual yet it is expected that we all say and do the same thing. You might like the poem I wrote this morning, it takes this idea a few steps forward.
Date: 1/19/2014 6:05:00 AM
Richard, this was an absolute delight to savor. Beautifully written... A masterpiece!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/19/2014 8:38:00 AM
Hi Sarai, so glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 1/19/2014 2:00:00 AM
These lines reeled me in with amusement of where you were taking me. I love how it ended. 'Scattered by the winds of change'. Brilliant writing my friend.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/19/2014 8:38:00 AM
What a nice comment Connie.
Date: 1/18/2014 7:07:00 PM
ABSOLUTELY THE LAST LINES, GREAT GREAT WORDS IT IS A HAUNTING WRITE BEAUTIFUL MY FELLOW SOUPER. AND THANKS FOR THE CONGRADS. CHERI
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/18/2014 7:50:00 PM
Hi Cheri, thanks.
Date: 1/18/2014 1:47:00 PM
Hi Richard, Awesome write bro..Good stuff.. Ken
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/18/2014 3:20:00 PM
Thanks Ken, much appreciated.
Date: 1/18/2014 12:46:00 PM
The last two lines.........just are a wonderful climax to this poem, Richard. Be heard......speak out.....we are listening.........
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/18/2014 3:20:00 PM
Thanks Eileen! That is nice to know.
Date: 1/17/2014 8:52:00 PM
interesting piece...its worth to be liberated from drudgery... nice write
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/18/2014 8:16:00 AM
Thanks for your visit Weston.
Date: 1/17/2014 8:45:00 PM
Very captivating!! Lovely write...Hugs, Maggie Mae
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Date: 1/17/2014 8:06:00 PM
Some sadness here and wishes for fulfillment from within..love,Deb
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Date: 1/17/2014 7:07:00 PM
I like the current title Rick great pen Shadow x smile hug
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/17/2014 7:28:00 PM
Thanks Shadow.
Date: 1/17/2014 7:02:00 PM
Great poem, Richard. Deeply expresses imagery, amazing scenery that was set in this piece. Enjoyable overall. Thank you, for ALL your comments on my poetry.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/17/2014 7:29:00 PM
Thanks Jiril, drop by any time. Have a good evening.

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