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Hello? Is there anyone out there? Can anyone hear me? Hello? You there. Yes I am speaking to you. Please can you help me? Where are you going? No. No. wait. Please dont leave me alone. I need your help. Why is this keep happening? Why does it hurt so bad? What did i do to deserve this? Im trying. Believe me Im trying. Im trying as hard as i can, But i just cant do it. Everywhere i turn seems like an opportunity but when i turn to that opportunity it seems to jump everywhere I cant no more. I just simply cant do it. Doctor. Nurse. Best friend. Mentor So much potential but will it come true Or will they just disappear into the blue I just cant no more So many times i hear im sorry i have never seen this occur then i get a shrug of the shoulders They dont care really As they move on with their lives to my pillow is where i run To shed my tears thinking about all of my fears Thinking of all my faults No where to run, nowhere to hide All the pain is just building inside it hurts so much but i must smile because i must fulfill my duty My duty to serve all out there but what happens when i cant will the world end? will the earth shatter? no they will move on and find another one to be strong as a father and as caring as a mother but what about me? huh. Is there no one, anyone please hear my plea for help please hear my plea for guidance the pain. the hurt. the disappointment is just too much to bear. please what more can i do please what more can i say i dont want your money I dont need your pity A shoulder to lean on is all im asking for A caring heart is all i seek please...please....please do you see these tears flowing from my eyes I hope you do because this might be the last time you do For after tonight, there will be no more me...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/12/2013 5:26:00 AM
Very expressive and emotive work..Sara
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Date: 12/17/2010 6:46:00 PM
Wow that really pulled at my heart strings..a very powerful write which I so identify with..I wrote a poem called 'Scared' perhaps you would read it..really enjoying your poetry....Allie
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Date: 12/16/2009 5:47:00 AM
What a sad, beautiful, honest, and touching poem. You have a way with expressing true feelings. Thank you for this poem and your comments on mine as well...Andria
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Date: 12/14/2009 8:31:00 PM
A sad touching write. It touches the soul. Thank you for your kind words on my work as well....Aleera
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Date: 12/13/2009 8:12:00 AM
A wekll written plea,the presentation so suits the content..you bring the picture to life Steve.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
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Date: 12/12/2009 11:48:00 PM
The desperation is felt through the lines in your write. I hope the last 2 lines are not literal lines. What is it you really want our of life? What inspires you? Follow what is really meaningful to you. Doesn't mean there isn't going to be some difficulties. That is part of the road to success. Believe. I'm open to listen anytime. Many people are going through very hard times nowawadays, so know, that you are not the only one. Thanks for sharing, your poet friend, Caroline.
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Date: 12/12/2009 10:58:00 PM
This is a desperate poem. I hope it is just a poet expressing an inspired thought. There are many here who would listen. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/12/2009 7:45:00 AM
Steve this is such a touching write...Just know that if this is more than just a poem I can be a shoulder...You can soupmail me anytime...Marty
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