No Journey Without the First Step

journey's amidst life is it a monkey puzzle reaching ones haven many travels unravelled the reward of a sweet rose .

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Date: 12/28/2015 12:35:00 AM

James, lovely rose isn't it? ;) witty tanka.. your lil one~Olive Eloisa hugsxxx

James Fraser
Date: 1/7/2016 1:04:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed my witty write, and yes indeed it's a beautiful Rose ~~ hugs//James ~~ xx

Date: 12/26/2015 2:20:00 PM

now this is really creative, james... that rose is worth it all.. huggs

Thanks much for that wonderful comment James. much appreciated..=`)

James Fraser
Date: 12/26/2015 2:51:00 PM

She certainly is Nette, she's wonderful, and will always bloom in my eyes. Hugs//James :)

Date: 12/26/2015 2:09:00 PM

Delightful tanka James:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 12/26/2015 2:45:00 PM

Hi Jan, I missed the contest, but I'd already started it so I thought it's better to continue ~~ Hugs ~~ James xx