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No It Wasn'T

No it wasn't my son who was shot and killed No it wasn't my husband who was sent to jail No it wasn't my brother, brother from blood But that was somebody's world at some point. No it wasn't my wife who was murderd with lies No it wasn't my daughter who's death was covered No it wasn't my sister, sister from blood But that could've been somebody's mom I can't go on and pretend that there ain't war in the streets That there's something terribly wrong with the way some people think There's so many words unspoken So many lives just taken Still so much injustice And hearts still broken My mama used to tell me that life was too short That whenever something hurt me To move on and just let go But this time it isn't only about me My heart is not the only one that hurts People out there think they don't have a choice They forget they have a voice Mothers are losing their daughters Husbands are losing their wives Children are losing their parents We can't continue to go round acting like everything is just fine

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Date: 2/12/2017 10:23:00 AM
Strong write. It's been a pleasure reading your poetry today, Karolina. Many are listed as "I don't know" under form. When in doubt they can usually be listed as "Free Verse." Check out the Forms tab at the top. You write with passion and I believe have a lot of potential, but my opinion is just that, and your desire to write is all that is important.
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Karolina Grimaldi
Date: 2/12/2017 2:54:00 PM
Wow, thank you so much for your words and your advice. I am in fact very new in sharing my poetry and expanding it and learning more is exactly what I need. I'm still very new with poetry soup but I'm very interested in sorts of contests.
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James Inman
Date: 2/12/2017 10:24:00 AM
(sorry limited characters per comment)... If you are interested, the Contests hosted here can be very helpful in expanding your poetic knowledge as well as inspiration for poems and can also offer a lot of exposure for your writes. Waiting to read more.
Date: 2/10/2017 12:27:00 PM
A well written poem, a shared expression. A 7 my friend!
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Karolina Grimaldi
Date: 2/12/2017 2:54:00 PM
Thank you Maureen

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