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No Healing Or Feeling

Trying and trying... I've been crying and crying.. stop the lying and lying.. losing and losing... I keep choosing and choosing... confusing and confusing... missing and missing... no more kissing and kissing... I keep wishing and wishing... sorrow and sorrow... not tomorrow...tomorrow... hard to swallow and swallow... Date Written: February 16, 2016 Written By: Laura Loo

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2016 5:37:00 PM

I like the repeating of the words. I did one like that once, it's nice for emphasis of your feelings.

Lu Loo
Date: 2/18/2016 9:58:00 AM

Thank you Andrea :)-luloo

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/17/2016 12:31:00 PM

A very shallow poem with great depth underlying its surface. Emile.

Lu Loo
Date: 2/17/2016 3:03:00 PM

Thank you Emile :) -luloo

Paul Callus

Date: 2/17/2016 9:24:00 AM

Loss and tears combine to make this a most emotional poem, Laura; repetition works wonderfully well. The secret is to never give up and have faith in those wishes and tomorrows:) ~ Warm regards // paul

Lu Loo
Date: 2/17/2016 9:34:00 AM

Thank you very much Paul :)*smiles* -luloo You are very sweet

Judy Konos

Date: 2/16/2016 10:28:00 PM

Very different Laura...I enjoyed....

Lu Loo
Date: 2/17/2016 9:01:00 AM

Thank you Judy :)-luloo *smiles*

Eve Roper

Date: 2/16/2016 8:54:00 PM

the repetitive of words does make your emotions be heard, if your hurting prayers if it is just a write; great job either way a7 Hugs sweet friend

Lu Loo
Date: 2/17/2016 9:00:00 AM

thank you Eve :)-luloo *Smiles*