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No Guarantee

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No Guarantee

“There’s no guarantee,”
He said with a smile
As his arms reached for me
Desire on his face
I hesitated

“No Guarantee”
Just rang in my ear
The last failed attempt
At finding a love
guaranteed to last
Had left me a mess
Of nothingness

He was so handsome
And so desirable
I closed my eyes
To his presence
Yet his scent
Enveloped me
Demanding my attention

I wanted him
I had wanted him
For so long
With such ferver
That the risk 
Seemed worth taking

“No guarantee
That it will last forever...
But I can guarantee this
I will make you fly!
Are you willing
To take a chance on me?"
He asked with a knowing smile
For he knew
He KNEW he pleased me
He had power

How his words
And tempted me
to reach out 
It drew me
Like the forbidden fruit
Calling to a modern Eve 
Juicy and bright
I wanted to bite in and taste
and luxuriate in the flavor
of a paradise
that would open my eyes
to new pleasures
Making me divine!

I was unaware
That he had pulled me in
His hands tightening around me
His lips tasting mine
Oh, the sweet taste of desire
That nearly seared
My sense of reason

“No guarantee?”
I pushed against his massive chest
As I wiped my lips
And straightened my blouse
“The man that wins me, my sweet
Is the man who comes
With a Full Guarantee!

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 4/5/2013 10:42:00 AM
    "Man that wins me comes with a full guarantee'....this is awesome and so are you! Love it! Hugs

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 4/5/2013 12:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, my dear Cecilia...I'm honored by your visit! :)
  1. Date: 4/2/2013 8:13:00 AM
    Resisting temptation oh so difficult. Great poem!

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 4/2/2013 10:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sometimes.....nearly impossible. can be done..with a little help! :)
  1. Date: 4/1/2013 4:09:00 PM
    Wow Eileen...kept me on the edge........of my seat.....MD.

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 4/2/2013 12:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry are a sweetheart for saying that! :) Glad you approved and liked it! hugs!
  1. Date: 4/1/2013 3:05:00 PM
    Hey like this Eileen, i love your sense of humour as well as all the other bits, but as for your poetry wow, now that is Guaranteed to please... not around as much,, but am looking in as much as possible .....

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 4/2/2013 1:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry glad that you are still around. Scared me with that last poem there! I love your work and would be very upset if you left the Soup. Thanks for your kind words...HUGS!
  1. Date: 4/1/2013 2:51:00 PM
    Eileen I love this, erotic and beautiful...David

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 4/2/2013 1:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    David, thanks ever so much! :) Two great adjectives there! :)